Pan Stan

  • Submitted on time! Jun 21, 2020
nurphgun
Once Upon A Time

An examination of my childhood obsession with Peter Pan.

Hey Pan, you’re the one I stan
A gust at your back, a lift to your limbs
You have the multiverse in your hand
It bends all laws to the will of your whims

Pause, look at those legs and arms
Swimming straight on to bliss
I need you to show me your emerald charms
If I put on the hat, can I do it?

Color of snakes and Ireland,
Ferns, cellular walls
And nature, the first woman
Hey, green’s the girliest color of all.

Was it about you? Or the things that you mean?
Questions to put off ‘til 2019.



Looking for feedback on

This was pretty rushed :| so anything at all!

Discussion

  • 7 Comments
nick July 2, 2020 9:11am

i am a sucker for lists, and “cellular walls” is a primo addition to this one. i would highly recommend dropping some four and the floor kick for an intro and let the house junkies get their groove on 🤖

nick July 2, 2020 9:11am

*outro

nurphgun July 5, 2020 4:51pm

great idea!

Ryan June 22, 2020 9:42am

Whoa, this is rad as hell. How did you get the ping-pongy base layer? I can’t tell what that is. Either way, super cool bubbly foundation to this tune. Great guitar part, too. What a mood. Based on the intro, it sounds like Mark Kozelek is going to sing the verse. You too should do a duet. Or maybe just you and Skylar. He’s probably the nicer version of Mark.

nick July 2, 2020 9:09am

lol, yeah mark’s a dirtbag

nurphgun July 5, 2020 4:57pm

Omg I didn’t realize but this totally is an homage to Growing Stone. The ping-pong is an amp called Triplet Tick Tock in Logic… I made a double of the acoustic guitar track and applied that effect. Glad you dig!

Carseat June 21, 2020 9:20pm

Man I realllly like the guitar in this. So zen.