Fever dreams
Il Duce
Dream Weaver
I never could follow instructions….
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I think it might need a piano or fretless bass or something
I never could follow instructions….
I think it might need a piano or fretless bass or something
Discussion
Rmal March 4, 2024 8:15pm
Been listening to this a lot. It’s a great tune!
alechutson March 2, 2024 6:33pm
This could go any number of ways with arrangement but also works quite nicely as a solo guitar/vocal piece. Nicely done!
nick March 2, 2024 9:42am
hey nice! this is big step up in recording quality. Like @@Ben said, great annunciation. And sure, some fretless, some piano, some strings. Go crazy!
EliasSZ February 29, 2024 7:22pm
Don’t have much to say, but I really like this. Guitar sounds really good and the whole thing just feels comfortable/comforting/some other word I can’t quite place.
I could dig a fretless bass, but I wouldn’t want you to add too much to this. Just things to aid the current vibe.
Really liked the line “Wish I had a dollar | for every night of restless sleep.”
Ryan March 2, 2024 12:41pm
Yep, that’s the lyric that stuck with me too.
Ben February 26, 2024 12:50pm
The only thing missing is a warm campfire. This is so soothing! You really annunciate well and I could make out every word—but if anything, you might consider smoothing your words out a bit. Phrases like “one stuck in your head” are punctuated a bit and go against the silky smoothness of the rest.
Carseat February 26, 2024 11:26am
I could so hear that fretless bass. Almost like the saw in “In the Aeroplane…” by Neutral Milk Hotel. If you do it please let me know… I dig.
Rmal February 25, 2024 10:40pm
LOVE the vocalization! Great melody. Like the bridge at 1:25. The tune is great stripped down, but if you thought you wanted more, I’m hearing angelic strings. Wonderful subject 🙂